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Friday 28 January 2011

Group Meeting: Pre re-pitch

Group Meeting

This meeting took place at 11:00 am, 28th January.
Our ammended pitch will take place on the afternoon of the 28th.

Current Alterations to our initial pitch

  1. Removal of opening scene in Angus's bedroom.
  2. Angus is drawing during the lecture scene, the class mock him but Jessica tells them to stop.
  3. Character of Luke is gone.
  4. Removal of the coming home/mugging scene, and the following bedroom scene.
  5. To be replaced with a Canteen scene, in which Angus reads a comic - a typical action v/o reading out the captions.
  6. Angus realises everyone else has gone to class, and, irratated at himself, swipes away the comic & glass of water with his mind.
  7. Makes like he plans to move the table, but regains composture and walks out.
  8. Title Card, with new title

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