Group Meeting
This meeting took place at 11:00 am, 28th January.
Our ammended pitch will take place on the afternoon of the 28th.
Current Alterations to our initial pitch
- Removal of opening scene in Angus's bedroom.
- Angus is drawing during the lecture scene, the class mock him but Jessica tells them to stop.
- Character of Luke is gone.
- Removal of the coming home/mugging scene, and the following bedroom scene.
- To be replaced with a Canteen scene, in which Angus reads a comic - a typical action v/o reading out the captions.
- Angus realises everyone else has gone to class, and, irratated at himself, swipes away the comic & glass of water with his mind.
- Makes like he plans to move the table, but regains composture and walks out.
- Title Card, with new title
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